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A Christmas Carol
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Comment by suba me on 10/25/19
WeJCNM Regards  for helping out,  fantastic  information. Comment by cheap backlinks on 07/18/14 uLtc9p Very informative article.Really thank you! Will read on... Comment by seo service on 09/05/13 9xXNR5 Thanks a lot for the article.Much thanks again. Much obliged. Comment by legion on 01/05/11 A lovely well done retelling of the story. While much unfolded logically when given a TG twist, the end was original and different, if but sad when considering the child Carol's seeming unoticed demise and replacement. On reflection though, perhaps the young and as yet evolving child Carol-spirit blended with, Ebeneza's. Healing 'his' while gaining strength from his redeemed spirit. People are complicated so whose to say how we get so. The femme spirit of both became a seamless oneness. Less sad to think this way, No ? Any way, thank you for the re-telling of this story. And may all your Christmas' be Merry :) Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 07/28/07 VERY SWEET STORY. SCROOGE BECOMES A LITTLE GIRL AFTERWARDS. INSTEAD OF TINY TIM DYING, CAROL DIES SO A NEW CAROL SCROOGE IS BORN. CAN YOU DO OTHER CLASSICS? I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A FEW OF THEM TWISTED. EVEN OUR FAVORITE SUPER HEROES. Comment by AJ Eric on 07/10/05 Seems awfully tough that the real Carol's life had to end at age six to make room for the reincarnated Ebenezer... Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 12/26/00 A delightful re-telling of an old story with modifications sympathetic to the gender crossers among us. I particularly liked that Scrooge was a suppressed crossdresser and how his death became the beginning for Carol. Thank you very much! Comment by Nellie D on 12/25/00 A very good retelling of A Christmas Carol with a slightly different ending. Comment by paul jutras on 12/25/00 good twist one a classic. love the work done here. |
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