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Christmas Dreams 2004
by Abby Rhodes

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Comment by sarah on 10/04/17
i love this and all the stories about Michelle and her Mistress. i just wish that there were more, especially about Michelle's photo shoot after her breast implants.

Comment by this is me on 08/02/12
Your red-herring had me on guard through the whole story. It was a good literary tool.

Comment by Notagirl on 06/07/12
Love it. Normally I like the sex to be described in more detail than this, but it doesn't spoil it at all. Very sexy and lots of fun! xx

Comment by Silvia on 05/22/10
Hi Abby.
I didn't like.
Silvia.

Comment by Annabel on 11/23/04
A hugely enjoyable story with enjoyable characters.  You have obviously taken a great deal of care to eradicate all spelling errors too.
I particularly enjoyed the wry humor in the story.
Hugs, Anabel

Comment by Pippa K. on 11/19/04
This story was, itself, a very jolly present for Christmas.  Even though I don't share your love of dominance, you have a way of making the story nonetheless wonderfully sexy and infectious.  Hope you and those you love have a very Happy one!

Comment by fregen on 11/19/04
You know, Abby, these stories are really a lot of fun.  Michelle and Julie appear to be in the perfect symbiotic relationship.  Both are getting *exactly* what they need.  

When you add Mandy and Sam to the picture I would have to think that Michelle really has found heaven on earth (except for the crop). ;-)  And I love the fact that although Michelle is submissive, she isn't a pushover.  She's smart, spunky, and gets to wear a lot of beautiful clothes!



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