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The Church
by Tery Maine

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Comment by DeeAnne on 10/20/08
Just read your story. Cried my eyes out. I could be in your situation
and have no idea how it will come out. But your story has iven me hope. Thanks.

Comment by Becky on 01/10/05
Thankyou for this story.  I have had my problems with two pastors from two different churches.

I ended up going to a church that the pastor had been from after the church had a split.  It wasn't this pastor that I had a problem with.  It was with an assistant pastor.

Well, anyway I seem to be accepted in this church.  I am told that it is a safe place.

You story has help me feel better about myself.  Thank you again.

Becky

Comment by Sydney Michelle on 10/21/01
A beautiful story of matching the outer shell with the inner soul. A well written and worthy prelude to your prior submission.

Ultimately we seek that enduring peace, more calm than mere physical exhaustion. Congratulations on skillfully setting forth the journey, not as one without shoals and storms, but finding a calm, safe harbor.

Sydney



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