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You have a nice start for a much longer piece.

This is the first day of maybe a or two day or maybe a week outing at hot spring. Right now you have four or five people that know that Micheal is now Michelle. How many other in this group do you want to know that Michelle is actually Micheal.

So we have the rest of the Hot Spring and Michelle being introduced to her family when she get home, because there expecting a boy by the name of Micheal. Then there school and Michelle adjusting to her new roll as a 12 year old girl. So there still a lot to go with this story if you choose to continue with it.

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why cain't something like this happen to me

I like the story is there more, I hope. The only question is who would let Ashley bring make-up to church camp?

I really like your writing style. Now perhaps we could make the chapters longer? Giggle.

Oh, talking about Religion is not a problem to me. I'm a Muslim :)

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Second part was good and though I myself am not big on the chirstian Religion I find this story but these two parts could have been combine to make part 1 instead of spereating them and haveing two small parts!

Good start but way to short trying making the second part a little bit longer please.

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a very good start and i cant wait to see what happens, especially michael now maybe michelle is face to face with Ashley.  Makes me wish i'd went to church camp after all.  thanks lots, Maggie

You have a nice start.  The action though seems a lttle sketchy. First hey are going to  go, next hey are on their way, then they go swimming, the most detailed action of the essay, and then he goes to sleep to awaken as a girl,  I am so full of questions.  Why doesn't he panic/ Why doesn't his friend?
What causes the change?  Will anyone else get changed?  Who is in charge? Why are they allowed to go mixed swimming, unsupervised, on the  first night?
The writing style is smooth and easy to read. The characters will be netter with a little fleshing out. And the plot will, I am sure, be explained in the next chapter.  I really am looking forward to the next chapter to get some of the answers. Thank you for sharing with us.

hope to learn how the change happen in future updates