Like all her stories this was extremely well written.  She might have made it more realistic if she had placed the setting in, say, 2020 when uniformed maids appeared in public like they did in the 20's, 40's and 50's in the US.  Even then our part-time student maids didn't curtsy, but then we weren't among the super rich.

Excellent conception, good development

its a good story where cindi becomes everything that she wrote about i feel that it will be a very long weekend before cindi makes a descion even though she is expected to say yes how to get away not bad contract of intrest if it says everything that has been discussed well done

the fantasy becomes fact great story well done it would be intersting to see how this one comes out very good story

this was an awesome story, delving into all things imagined.
i can't see, haven't seen a better story anywhere, especially since history of the writer, writing porn, was characterized. And i know that those stories were writ, so that adds additional gravitous.

i simply loved it. i will read this one again, many times.

sincerely,

latexslut

(ps, it was good that you didn't go Too far) (on the other hand, hopefully, in the sequel, you might).

Well-written.  Fairly realistic.  Good transisitions and consistant detail.  Interesting enough to keep me reading even though the subject matter didn't fully appeal to me.  Just to clarify - I enjoyed most of the subject matter, but a few minor things kept me from really enjoying it:

I understand sexual denial as a means to sexual arousal, but I don't understand the constant sexual denial that seems to be the theme here.  It seems the main character has all sorts of sexual responses to his experiences, but the prospect of denying those responses seems to defeat the purpose of having those experiences.  If it were me, I would at least insist that the chastity belt be removed at night so I could enjoy the fantasy that has been created for me.  Now if Cindy had been a true TS and didn't constantly exhibit the male instinct, I think I would have understood Cindy's motivation better.  

It is also difficult to understand the motivation of the Carlsons.  There was very little to indicate that they were interested in Cindy for sexual gratification (except for the brief mention of Dr. Carlson's fetish for piercings).  So why go through all the expense and trouble of feminizing a man to do a job that you could probably hire a real woman to do much more easily?  It seems that if they just want household duties performed, which is all that has occurred as yet, then there are easier ways to get them done.

These are mere nitpicks and could probably be corrected in future chapters, but you might give some thought to them.  Either way, you are a very good author, and I don't mean any disrespect.  Keep up the good writing!

-Ami

Dear Karen Anne,

I enjoyed your story very much and I hope it will continue. I read as well, with great interest and excitement your other story Jacqui.

I am a part time male maid myself and I write stories as well, not that many and not that well since English is not my native language. You can find stories of mine in Bea's TV channel.

I like stories that are real and the maid or maids do real work and dress in sensible neat uniforms.

Thanks again for your stories and keep going writing.

Best regards from a fellow maid

Monica