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Cindy Anderson
by Carol Clark

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/19/11
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Comment by Molly on 09/01/08
I don't see the love and support that Barbara mentions. I don't see overt hostility either, like Pervette says, but I do see a subtle sort of "getting even" from the three girls -- the two sisters, and one of the sisters brings her friend along. The friend, Denise, states things most clearly: boys should be made to dress as girls, to discover what girls "have to do" (IOW, have to suffer). One thing seems sure -- the whole community will know all about their brother within the next 24 hours.

Everyone gets what they want, except the main character. Mom gets to have a third daughter, and the girls get a toy to play with. The main character gets asked a gazillion questions rapid fire, but no one is really listening to any of his answers. He is not sure that he wants to *be* a girl, but he likes the clothes. Past that, he is not clear on his feelings. Rather than helping him to explore his feelings and being willing to take things at his speed, his mom and sisters absolutely take him over. It really is all about them and what they want, and not about him at all.

No, it's not a femdom humiliation story, at least, but it doesn't feel very supporting and loving, either. What it *does* feel is very, very plausible -- this may well be the best that many of us can hope for, considering the alternatives.


Comment by jeannette on 11/14/07
Nice Story! Been there, done that (with my older Sisters)! Hope you keep the story going!

Comment by Briar on 07/19/07
I agree with everyone else about this being a nice story.  However, the way you make "Cindy" speak, she sounds far older and more grown up than she could possibly be, and this makes her character seem unbelievable.  You need to have her speak like a child, not an adult.

I mean this to help you, not to be unkind.  I hope you will continue the tale and revise the conversations that have already passed.

One other thing - who was driving the car?  Mother was in the passenger seat at the front, Sally and Denise were at the back with Cindy between them, Janet it never said, but she would have been too young to drive, surely?


Comment by Jackie on 04/30/05
I really really loved this story but it made me recall the day one of my sisters found me in her bedroom weaing her lingerie,she was 18 and I was just turned 10. Oh how I wish to this day that she could have been understanding like the sisters in your story. "Oh what might have been" Please continue.

Comment by Neighbor on 10/07/03
Nice story. Hope you continue,

Comment by julie on 04/27/03
an interesting story I was quite suprised how things turned out with no aguements and a suprise for his siters his mothers attitude was quite impressive even though she had caught him this story could go a lot further it is worth thinking about

Comment by Theresa on 04/24/03
Please, please, please write some more of this delightful story. I love Cindy and her family. This is the type of story that I just adore and would like to be able to write myself.

Thank-you, Carol!

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 04/04/03
Very sweet story! A sequel would be lovely.

Comment by Michelle on 03/22/03
Very cute story.  I agree that we should hear more of Cindy!  Out to a party with her sisters some night, a tame party at someone's house, she dances her first dance with a boy her age and experiences a first kiss, etc.  

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 02/19/03
Yes, I agree with the others. This little tale of being accepted by the mother and sisters,as well as one friend, was quite refreshing. The teasing part was realistic, as it is natural for genetic girls to tease a boy in girls clothing. However, the love and support that Cindy gets is refreshing. When I was dressing as a girl before my transition was complete, I had the love and support of an entire small, mid-west town, as well as a camp director and her daughters. So, I know from exprience, that a boy can be accepted by normal females in his crossdressing. Nicely done, very sweet and sentimental.

And I agree also, that we need to see more of Cindy.

Please continue this with the shopping trip. I would like to see how Cindy reacts trying on the various outfits that are coming her way, as well as the beauty salon to get her hair and nails done. Also, Cindy should be presented to her father, who will rebuke her at first but then, gradually accept his new daughter. Cindy needs to go to school as Cindy, a girl, and not her former self, a boy. OMG I better stop or this will take up forty pages, lol. Well anyway, you get what I'm saying. Cindy should stay.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Alana1960 on 02/17/03
Nice sweet story. Not too overdone.
the characters work for me.

Would enjoy seeing it progress.
Cheers!

Alana

Comment by Mary on 02/15/03
Thank you for nice story.

Mary

Comment by Julie on 02/14/03
 Very sweet, and nicely written.  It could use a little more detail though, especially about Cindy's clothes and the process of getting dressed.  It seemed rushed in spots.

Comment by Pervette on 02/14/03
When you have a story where the boy's dressing is accepted by his
mother, it's a bit hard to believe when the sister(s) go along as
well.  It's just a bit too easy to be true.  So I liked the fact
that in this case the girls, while not actually hostile, couldn't
resist teasing him.  That seemed so realistic, & yet not overdone.
I thought this the most original aspect of the story, & I liked
it.  I thought you handled it well & plausibly.

--Pervy

Comment by Paula on 02/14/03
sweet and loving little tale here



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