honestly... Cindy is a bitch. like what the hell did Tom do to deserve this.

Stories contain a nice few surprises, but too much run-in and repeat.  Nice to find someone who can spell and knows grammar.

I agree with the others, the arrest seems to go "missing"!

Maybe Lee is going to use it to further her plans with the new Cindy!

It's a magnificent story, but I have to concur with the questions about the arrest that went away like magic.  Otherwise, you did it yet again.  Maybe you can resolve the hooker arrest in # 5

Part 4 turned out wonderful after all. Not big on rape and all but like how it went with the new Tom gone and the new Cindy has someone new to complete the process of transformation.

I don't understand, what happened with her being arrested?  You seemed to just ignore it in Part 4.

Look forward to future parts of this story. Truely wonderful and will be great to see what's next.

It has a real nightmarish quality. I have a very strong feeling he was set up - especially the way he ended up in jail! I think for some reason she is stealing his identity - will they swap 'privates' down the line since he has now been finger printer as Cindy?



Eric

Chapter 4 is the same as chapter 3!

Damn! I was very excited when I say 4 posted, and a spot for 5!

Hope it gets fixed soon!

It's pretty obvious that cindy set Tom up for the prostitution thing, but we have yet to find out why she is turning into such a bitch.  On the other hand, Tom sort of deserves what's happening; why on earth just meekly enter a guilty plea when all it would take, from his point of view (still not realizing it's a set up) would be getting "Tom" to tell the "truth" to the police.  If he thought he was stuck as cindy for a while he wouldn't want a record for himself, and if he thought he would go back to Tom, still thinking of the real Cindy as his friend, he wouldn't want a record for her.  

This should be categorized under "Secretary/Office" as well, but don't please don't let it end here. That closing remark "Cindy, For Life" leaves a whole lot of unexplored possibilities, and you're nailing this one every step of the way.

Wonderfull story.But please don't let Cindy change Tom into a hooker.Life as a women can be enough uncomfortable for him especially with Cindy acting like a man.He should try to fight for his oryginal personality.And tell us something about Cindy.Why she wanted the whole swap?

You CAN'T stop here!

Now what happens to the New Cindy in her new job?
What happens when her new police record" is known at her new job?
What will the new Tom do as "his" old identity is now closed off to her?

You just CAN'T stop the story here!  

Please!

So far so good Jean.  Keep it going.  

I think the former Cindy is behind it all - for some reason the new Tom wants the former tom to be Cindy! And of course then the former Cindy will be Tom! Will they switch sex organs, too?

I really love it.  I can't wait for more.  Lately I haven't been very interested in the stories posted but I really loved this one.  I love to read more of Cindys life.  Looking forward to the next part.  Hope you write more soon.

wanted to add that I hope for a part 3

Much better attitude on the real Cindy.  The idea of the bet getting carried away works well since bets oftentimes do go too far.  I guess it is the "who will give up first" syndrome, but you did it well.  I look forward to reading how Tom, now Cindy, handles being Cindy fulltime.

I also liked how you got Tom to piss off the doctor with his "this is no problem" attitude.

Part 2 was wonderful sweet and a refreshing story to read compared to others I read lately. Great work on the troubles of being a woman 24-7 and quite sweet too.

um a few questions? why did tom change from wanting to get out of the situation in part one to actively betting it was no big deal and volenteering to try it for longer. parts one and two feel disjointed and i think the change in attitude of cindy with her threats and the gleeful spite after the implants detracts from the story. huggles from prue

I really love this story and hope you post more real soon.  :)

The story started with an interesting twist-  g/f wants to turn b/f into her identical twin. Would have liked a little more detail about that. However, it started to break down when she got threatening. Not too late to salvage it- how about exploring the angle where they enrich their relationship by continuing their posing as twins- i could see lots of interesting scenarios.

I have to agree with Pervette.  This story was much more enjoyable when Cindy was being nice.  When she turned nasty I was left wondering if I had missed something.  If this is the path you are going down I won't be reading any more.  Why ruin a good thing?

Enjoyed the story though far fetched, it is the type of fantasy most of us dream about but know it will never happen. I have enjoyed most of your stories they keep a gal warm on cold winter nights here in Minnesota. Thank you, Diane

Two problems here.  1. Motivation: what did he do to her to deserve
all this? It starts out as a game, & then when he's had enough,
she turns nasty, for no apparent reason other than that she isn't
getting her way. Or did I miss something? 2. Credibility.  A man's
anxiety over being busted in drag can go only so far, & the kind of
man Tom is portrayed as being would have torn that contract up &
given the game away rather than sign it. Is he afraid he'll lose
her? A woman who shows no more sensitivity--or plain decency--than
that is well lost.  Finally, the legal threats are empty, & a man
smart enough to run a consulting business would know that.
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--Pervy

I enjoyed your story and am looking forward to the continuing story

I really liked this story and hope you continue with it.  Hope to read more real soon.