very good story it made a huge change from the vast amount that,s on offer.

At first I was greatly disturbed but found I could continue hoping for Derek's survival....getting more and more unhappy but the ending was superb and the bad guys get it the end....well done, well done

Holy Cow this was hot! As well, the plot was well drawn out, with a great disclosure of the sexy secret agenda. I agree that the story went on a bit too long, which I wouldn't have minded if there was a bit more dwelling on the fetishy good looks of our heroine at the end. Still, this was awesome!

Gee a very well done story that I had really not expected. However, never had read one of Joe's stories I should resurve that comment as this is a nice done story.

I just take it that Joe has done as well with the many others he has allowed to be posted here. I now look forward when the time is right for me to read more of this authors stories.

Diane

I'm becoming quite a fan of Joe's stories. This was a fine one with plenty of suspense and just the right touch of humor. Keep up the good work! As far as length is concerned, I found it just right.

Great Manchurian candidate story. It works very well. It could be worked into something that would be a commercial success.

I really liked the story.  It's a good idea and it worked well here hon.  Also I have to say the length was perfect, it couldn't get any real smaller without it effecting the quality of the story.  Don't listen to the people who complain about the length, these people basically like 10k stories which have no background and suck.

A good concept for the story being in hiding and the brainwashing and all. Though the story was longer than I'd of like it to be.