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C is for Charlotte - Freaky Friday
by Bethany Jacques

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Comment by Eric on 06/23/04
Pretty well done, with an ending I wasn't expecting (despite the title) -- not that I thought Charlotte would want to switch back.

One concern: there's a reference about two-thirds of the way through, a picture caption with Charlotte, Michelle and "sister Georgina".  Seems odd, even if it WAS at a Rocky Horror show.

Eric



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