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While Chastity enjoyed a low crime rate for a very long time, it became notorious for quite another reason.

High school student Fred Small, along with several of his male classmates, managed to obtain semi-automatic weapons.  They stormed the school, taking a number of hostages including teacher Roremary Jackson as well as several mothers who were in school for a parent-teacher conference.

During hostage negotiations, Fred Small demanded to speak to a reporter for Channel 42 and described in graphic detail the abuse the boys had suffered at the hands of the women of Chastity.  At the end of the interview, Small placed a pistol in his mouth and committed suicide on live television.

Investigations are continuing.  A grand jury is expected to hand down indictments of Leonie Small, Martha Green, Pauline Stevenson, and other ringleaders of the sexual abuse ring.  Local civic leaders have joined with prominent political and religious leaders in their condemnation of Chastity's "...obvious dearth of moral values."

...INS News Service

Hello, Derry!

Your second installment has come out by now, and it may be easier to follow (I've not yet read it.), but this first piece needs an editor! (It could be you, the author, or someone else.) The frequent grammatical and sensical breaks definitely hamper the flow of the narrative.

Some of your readers have taken issue with a few of the principles in your mythical (?) town of Chastity. That is their prerogative, just as it is your's to construct the story as you think best. However, even the naysayers are bound to have a better impression of Chastity et al, if your presentation shows the effect of the author having taken his/her work seriously.

I love this story. I just finished it for the third time. I don't think it could be put together any better. I could read about City of Chastity everyday. Please write sequel after sequel.

If I was the boys 18 I am out of here .Or do what I did become a TS.BUT GOOD STORY it just me I am  the sort to say up your did right through school when I was told to be more of a man .

I find that the story was hard to follow, I got lot shortly after the beginning and it got even worse after that. A good re-write would be nice. I also diasgree that with suroeriority of one sex over another, in our times women and men are equally aggressive and submissive. our societyis not set up for an oliarchy and thuse would coem to ruin in a short period. I am not really a fan of petticoat punishment as to degrade a humn being is to make them lesser of a human than they should be. Perhaps your ideal Utopia would be would be like an Amazone village. you do remember th amazons killed thier males when finished with them.

I don't care what the other's say.....I believe that this story is well written....and that the concept is solid.  Women in control with the men petticoated and under chastisement is a wonderful idea!!!

It would be also wonderful if you could enlarge your concept, and develop another story or addition to this one.

Thanks for a very erotic and entertaining interlude.

Good story, however, I beleive that there is no superior sex.  That everone has their strengths and flaws and just because men are usualy more agressive doesn't mean that women aren't, that is one thing that I think your story was missing... not to mention the natural instinct to fight back against repression, which there was little of according to the history of this town.

While the town may seem safer, I expect that the towns construction has suffered plenty due to this new shift in politics, and without the male's natural strength and stamina; little that requires such things may be completed.

O well, your story, just thought I would put in my two cents.

To make laws equal, there should also be laws for women who commit adultery.