One of the best stories I have read. I only wish the story continued as you left us hanging and always wondering if Clarissa and Jenny ever get together and where the Jenny and Dan take their relationship. You are a great writer and sure leave your reader's on the seat of their pants wanting to read more. Thanks
PS: please don't show my name if your use my comments.

This was exceptional!  i could not stop reading it.  i wish that i had read it before my girlfriend passed.  Our whole relationship might have been different and much better.

Just finished part one and I am facsinated with every word.  Can't wait to read the next part.

This story is continued at my site alamo-preacher.com

the story completion is very good it was an intresting read between to adults what can i say but well written

I think that this story is good it has great charachter anfd stly two consenting adults  this is intresting the next part i woill read later  but for ther parts that may be in the story post them on this siteplease

Just to let you know, there is some continuation of this story at http://alamopreacher.com

Al.

A great story, eloquently erotic, captures the essence of the sub-TG-fetishist with style, intelligence, and characterization. And the sex ain't bad either.  Don't stop the story!

Hey, I have just read part one, and had to write to tell you how much I enjoyed it! So intelligently written and well thought out. I must say I don't usually bother with the long stories because they take too long to get to the TV bits that we're all here for. However part one reveals itself in such a way that I just had to keep reading. Its nice that Dan isn't 'humilliated' by his wife like in so many other stories, but instead an adult consensual game ensues and jenny becomes what many of us (Me anyway) fantasise about, a perfectly understanding wife. Ok then, on to part two. Thankyou Alamo, you created something special there, nice one.

Good catch with the cars - I'll have to catch that.

You make a number of observations and accusations which I have more problems with. You say Clarissa when I presume you mean Jenny - Jenny is the psychiatrist. I don't think that she is exploiting a weakness in her husband - in fact I don't see his desire to be submissive, wear her clothes, or even for her to sleep with other people as weaknesses at all. I believe (although with no more than anecdotal evidence) that such a relationship can be just as loving and honest as any "normal" monogomous relationship.

Since I started to write this kind of fiction I've received a lot of email from people who claim to be in just such relationships - often for a very long time - which seem to work for them, and even strengthen and deepen their love for each other. I don't always believe them, I have to admit, but I don't think they can all be living in denial or just making things up.

In any case, this is just fiction - a piece of fantasy. I had thought that I reveal quite a bit of Jenny's inner thoughts and doubts about what she does, and unless you think she is lying to herself all the time I don't think there's evidence for the motives you ascribe to her. I don't think I describe a "hidden agenda". I don't think she has one. Her husband is a willing partner in what they do - he suggests and describes his fantasies to her. He's actively encouraging her.

I don't think I hate psychiatry or psychiatists - I've never been in therapy, or even met a psychiatrist, that I remember. I think your use of the word "slut" is a little more revealing.

Of course, your reaction to what I've written is just as valid as my opinion - if it provoked these opinions in you then perhaps what I've written isn't as clear on these issues as I would hope them to be, and perhaps you see things in my writing which I cannot, or only experience subconciously. I hope you're wrong. Certainly, the conclusion of this story will not see Dan's destruction or indeed, anything bad happen to anyone. Mostly my writing ends with everyone getting what they desire and deepening their love for each other.
Your mileage may vary of course. Thanks for your comments, and taking the time to write. I hope, when I eventually do finish the  story you'll read that and like the ending better.
Al.

How can you wash both cars, when one is in use. There are more flaws against logic related with the word trust. I see a very shelfish orientated Clarissa who is exploiting a weakness in her mate to fulfill her hidden agenda, whatever the consequences because she doesnot take responsebillity what he hands over, but only seeks for minimal resistance to her goals. This can easselly lead to destruction of her partner in more then one way. She is a total slut in this. I wonder if the hidden motif of this story is not the hatred, from the writer, against her profession because she sins against willfully against a lot of the ethics in the profession

Just goes to show ya.  Even a fancy degreed psychiatrist can turn out to be a total slut!

I have read everything I could find from your pen.  Each one grabs the reader and flows at a leisurely, erotic pace.  Your characters are so completely real and I fall in love with some of them.  “Clarissa” is such a wonderful story of love and submission.  I really can’t wait to see what develops, but of course I will with great anticipation!  Thanks  

its nice! whens part 2 coming?

Classic!  Really looking forward to part 2!

Thank you for the oppurtunity to to share your story. It is I am sure going to make a lot of people like myself with a similar outlook more honest with our partners.
I look forward to reading further episodes and other stories you have penned.
Evonne

Just Beautiful!  You are such a talented weaver of thoughts and feelings and emotions.  I know you are living it when you are writing because I live it when I read your wonderful stories. Thank You. Please continue.

I have been reading your stories for years.  I miss your website.  Please post more.  I would also love to read the rest of "Stephanie's Scheme"

I lovewd the story and would love to read more. ssb

your story was brilliant loved it cant wait to read more Thanks

Great Story!  Please keep it going.  I'm really interested in where it's going.  

Love it.  Let's have more, please.

Wow!  A very erotic and extremely well written story that pushed  ALL of my buttons.

Just awesome!