Hey hey hey, take a gaendr at what' you've done

This isn't even a story.  It'd be like writing, "I looked up and watched that cute new student walk past my desk."  That's not a story...it's not even a scene.  And, if all the guys are wearing skirts or dresses, then there's no TG element.  If the protagonist isn't conflicted in some way by the way he's dressed, either embarrassed, humiliated, or titillated, or people looking at him are not shocked or amused, then what's the point?

A story line that might be interesting would be to take your gender reversed male and drop him someway into our universe and watch how he and his new environment react to each other.

Melanie

A teacher finds the appearance of a student of the opposite sex distracting, and nothing happens as a consequence.  I'm sorry; naming the student Paul doesn't make this TG, and posting it on Storysite doesn't make it a story.  (Also, changing tenses halfway through and running sentences together doesn't make it very coherent.)

It's really disappointing to me to see items like this from Heather at this late stage, after the more complete and more lucid stories under her byline over the past several months.  It gives the impression that she's unable to tell the difference...