Bad bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad.bad..........................
Silvia

what a way to go its a hard fact that ethinic minorities pick up things faster its a strange but interesting story of being caught at it

Mysti, I'm willing to admit I've had that fantasy too.  And it is racist myth that African americans and mentally challenged men have bigger sexual equipment.  Having had sex with some African americans I found lacking in size of equipment.  This slut can only assume the same would be true of a representative sample of the mentally challenged.  

Very nice story.  I agree with most of Andrea's comments, but think she might have been a triffle too harsh.  While it would have been nice to have the details spelled out, I just assumed that some of the Indian concoctions that Robert/Sakari was made to buy and ingest had the effect of dumbing him down and compelling him to continue in the transformation.

SS

     Finally! A story that explores a slow, forced-fem transformation into an Indian women with more detail than "when I woke up, I was a Hindu."  The use of the skin cream to transform the skin color, and the hair grown out to  a long and lustrous black, were nice touches, as were  the descriptions of the clothes and makeup. The mind shift, including English becoming the second language and being spoken with an accent, was  good, if a little hurried, and not really explained. I agree with Andrea that the ending came too abruptly. I would like to see a story of this type   where the transformation is laid out in more detail and is gradual, over a longer period of time. On the down side, Meeah Soo unfortunately  felt compelled to include the obligatory scene in which the soon-to-be-fem is raped by a black man. Am I the only reader who is offended by the fact  that she includes a black rapist (or rapists) in almost all of her stories?

This story has a lot of nice touches. Some of the descriptive writing is very good, and of course the whole story simmers with dominance and submission. I have a soft spot for forced dressing where the victim is made to speak with a different accent, so I definitely liked that aspect.

Unfortunately I feel that the description of Robert's transformation into Sakari is a bit vague and choppy, and Robert's motivation for continuing in his new role isn't clear, once any blackmail pressure is removed because his changes have become obvious to his co-workers. Why does he become unable to understand his own work? Is mind-control at work? If so, it's not really mentioned in the story.