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Clicks-R-Us: An SRU Story
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Comment by washington dc cbd on 03/02/21
OThBCW Thanks again for the article.Much thanks again. Want more. Comment by seo service on 09/07/13 Hb9UK3 Very informative article post. Great. Comment by Silvia. on 09/01/11 Very bad story. Comment by Brenda Brennan on 11/02/10 NOT INTERESTED IN CHILD PORN, WHETHER IT BE FICTION OR FACT. Comment by eric on 06/27/10 i think you did a good job on this keep up the good work Comment by JAS on 01/22/09 Eric, Ryan received his just desserts by doing what everyone on the SRU universe forgets to do, read the fine print. Ryan accepted the EULA without ever reading it. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 05/12/07 The writing's good and the story's straightforward. As a stand-alone story, it's a solid job, if not exactly one where virtue triumphs. (Our protagonist, after all, is turned into a girl for no reason of his own, and then his (male) consciousness is wiped out when he registers his disappointment. Further, he's misled into sealing his own doom with the Latin spell. Still, identity death's fairly standard for an SRU story, except for the betrayal part here -- the Wizard usually alters the mind to begin with in a case like this where it wouldn't be comfortable in the new scheme of things.) Comment by shalimar on 05/08/07 I had two problems with the story. First, it was just a transformation story. The story was not much more than that. Comment by Jennifer Campbell on 05/08/07 I really liked your story and I didn't think your phrase was cheesy. I think all of us who think of ourselves as girls wish there was spell that would turn us into girls. The second phrase made sense because if Ryanne couldm't be a boy, then it would make sense that she knew on a subconscious level that she was a girl and had always been.The poor thing would have been livimg a nightmare of Gender identity disorder if the wizard hadn't done that. Nice job! I am an author myself, but I haven't posted anything yet. |
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