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The Closet
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Matthew on 09/07/05
Is there anymore to this story Because I would relly like to finish reading it.

Comment by Lindsey on 08/29/05
I'm not really into magical stuff all that much, but this was still fun to read.  One thing that bothers me, though, was the whole "you'll forget all about being a boy" bit.  That sort of thing is fine in a third person story, but it's a bit silly in a first-person one.  If you can't remember being a boy, how did you manage to write the story?  



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