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Clothes Encounters
by Jennifer White

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Comment by SassySue on 07/23/16
This reads like a Vickie Tern story as a man is led toward complete feminity by his wife for her own reasons even if that is not really what he wants.  The epilogue did explain why the husband didn't resist and why he was changed in the first place, even if I and others would say that was not enough justification.

I nevertheless enjoyed all the details and appreciated all the hard work Jennifer put into writing this story.


Comment by Jaclyn on 12/13/11
I feel satisfied after reandig that one.

Comment by juliej on 04/29/08
brilliant story what a way to go

Comment by juliej on 07/27/07
intersting story a pleasent pause for thought

Comment by Robyn Smith - Chicago on 11/06/06
Just one quick question - How does one go about making Lobster Bisque out of King Crab Legs?

The way this section of thew story is presented, that is exactly what supposedly happened.  :-)


Comment by suna on 10/31/06
The path of the story is presented early and the thoughts of the 'victim' are an interesting read. I do disagree with Jill about the 'why' being presented at the end. There is a hint that it may be because men are beasts and will make better women if properly conditioned but that is not really a reason. The way this would go as there is a pyramid would result in hundreds, eventually thousands of conditioned people all on a mental leash to someone or some group. For what end ??  

I also do not agree that Emily is a *itch because she goes on to pass along her own conditioning. Is that included by the hands behind the plot??

I see that Jennifer White is not inclined to multi-part stories but this should have a audience if you come to a clear plot.

Thank you for the view from your mind's eye.


Comment by jillmi on 10/05/06
I almost didn't read this after reviewing the other comment.

My reaction to the story couldn't be more opposite. The author skillfully showed the husband being led blindly down a path of no return.

In the end we are shown exactly how this all occurred and why.

It is unethical to comment on a story you don't actually read. Jennifer, you should ask Crystal to remove that other comment.

Jill M I (Angela Rasch)


Comment by Leah on 10/01/06
I disciplined myself to read this story -- until I was about halfway finished, then I contented myself with about one sentence in the middle of each paragraph. After all that work, I wanted to see the denouement behind all the verbiage.

Unfortunately there was nothing worthy of the name. The main character is kind of discarded, an ultra-feminist cabal is introduced in the last few paragraphs. And I never did learn why Emily was such a bitch. Not the typical wife taking on another lover to debase her feminized husband, thank goodness, but nothing to really take its place.

And while I'm thinking about it, the reader also does not get a satisfactory idea of why the husband puts up with all the BS. He kept claiming he loved her, but after repeated sadistic acts, I couldn't see how her tutelage in behaving as a woman overrode her own despicable behavior.




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