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Cloud Nine
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Vanni / Nina on 07/09/06
It's actually pretty nice seeing you play with lesbian themes again. The straight woman Stepford fantasies were getting a bit old, at least for me. Thought maybe you'd had forgotten some of your best works, like "As the Girl Turns". But I wouldn't have complained even if you did keep writing those themes, I mean, it's not my place to complain. But I am happy to see the themes I like again.

Comment by Juliette Lima on 07/06/06
Take care with all your wishes made
The granting is oft not as you bade
To win you oft must lose much
And live with one who is such
As you did not know while love might fade.

Comment by Eleanor on 07/01/06
A bit like the Sisters of Athernia story, with the difference that he truely loves the girl.Should he/she fall out of love with her,he/she won't ever be able to show it. 10/10



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