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Coed for Keeps
by Karen Elizabeth L.

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Comment by buba suba on 08/12/18
rJ618s We can no longer afford established veterans if they have interest in him than expected.

Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/18/14
TLecTa Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

Comment by Alison Mary on 08/08/09
You just continue to amaze me .Thank you.ALISON

Comment by Didi on 06/24/09
Lucky girl. A whole package wrapped up in a measly 4-year commitment that assured a lifetime of success.
Great story.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/09
Hi Karen.
This is your type of writing.
Great story, good job. I loved it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Trying to understand on 02/03/09
This was a terrific story, very sentimental and challenging.  However, I couldn't help but be disappointed that the author was to anxious to post this story before carefully proof reading it.  There were so many errors in the story.  Words left out, spaces between words and several times I had to read the paragraph or sentence several times to get the continuity of the sentence.  I have found this to be true of many of the authors on this site.  Good stories, but poor english, spelling and sometimes continuity.  Overal all though, I like this story very much.  It was void of filthy words, sex, etc.  Very well written and clean for the reading.  Thank You!  Even though, I am a preacher and do not approve of unnecessary sex changes and homosexuality in general.  However, I have learned that there are valied reasons that may require some to have to have a change.  Such as, accidents where the gentilia is destroyed, or when a child is born with both sexes and a choice has to be made.  I have to hold to the Holy Scriptures in the things of a moral nature and will leave the judging to God.  I am seeking to understand in order to be a better counselor to those who come to me for help.  This story, does bring out some compassion with me.  Thanks again, this story held my attention.  Please edit and fix the problems and I'm sure your readers would be grateful.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/06/05
I can't believe I haven't read and commented on this gem before.

I really liked this story; it was sweet, the change was Jim's choice, and the GG characters, mom and Candy, were loving, caring and gentle or tough as needed to help him.  I do wonder though why, in the beginning, Jim never considered just coming out as a lesbian?  

It is a tribute to your skill, Karen, that you can write well a sweet story like this and also write well what I still consider an incredibly scary horror story of undeserved forced feminization, "Jamie".

Comment by julie j on 07/29/05
an excellent concept of a way to impose a bad guy to a good girl well written &xplained  a great story

Comment by laura ann on 04/27/04
just love your story. its so emotional.loved the story line. best because there was no sex.  

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/30/03
Just loved the story

Comment by zip on 08/07/03
hmmm, a very good story, not one of those forced things or sex slave things but a story in which the main character has a choice (somewhat) copes with his problem and eventually decides he/she like it.

Comment by Sandra on 10/06/01
Dear Karen :)

Thank you very much for this wonderful story :). I couldn't stop reading it, I was hocked :).
This is such a lovely discription of emotions and love and caring, and how wonderful it is to be a woman. I had to smile near all the time, and I had tears in my eyes, tears of joy :)

A very thnkful Sandra :)

Comment by Again, congratulations,and I hope to read more of your works soon.
All my love
Jean Camille
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Comment by Sandra on 10/06/01
Dear Karen :)

Thank you very much for this wonderful story :). I couldn't stop reading it, I was hocked :).
This is such a lovely discription of emotions and love and caring, and how wonderful it is to be a woman. I had to smile near all the time, and I had tears in my eyes, tears of joy :)

A very thnkful Sandra :)



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