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Comment by Inem on 01/05/13
Dude, right on there borther. Comment by Aleesha on 05/22/09 Quite an unusual story, but very good. Many of the stories I have read and which are very good have me wondering how the writer could forget such things like voice and an Adam's apple. The negative comments like $5000 for the operation could have been forgotten as the authors should have realised that your tale was just a story. Another good story, well done. Comment by Great Sage on 02/24/09 The story itself was neat and fun - it wasn't very clear at the end though whether John was Gay or TG. I also would question some of the ignorance Ashley had regarding feminine behaviour - but these points have already been made. Comment by dee on 09/08/07 one of the best story i've read and the ending was great. Comment by J-Lynn on 06/10/07 Jennifer, Comment by juliej on 12/29/04 a brilliant story well made out well written *& explained what a way to go revenge at last Comment by tanyalynn on 07/25/04 I always look forward to your stories and finally have time for the old ones. really loved this one. Wish you would come back and continue it. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/23/03 I loved it! A happy ending for all, even John. I liked that you didn't make Ashley a gorgeous petite little thing like in so many stories. I thought you described a realistic self-taught transexual. Comment by Briar on 05/23/03 I found this a neatly thought out plot - good twist at end. The points about cost of operation and inexperience with makeup and not wearing dresses and skirts made already are valid, but IMHO the point about boys not listening is no empty steriotype, it is just the truth about boys - that IS how they are !! Comment by B on 05/22/03 She has been on hormones for five years and she doesn't know how to do her makeup properly and she doesn't wear any skirts? Also I didn't like how you assigned all these "male" characteristics on to her like not "listening". I think it was very sterotypical and just because she wasn't born non-trans doesn't mean these things are true. I have a few other complaints to. Also 5000 for the operation? Wow cheap. Comment by Paula on 05/22/03 I like it up to the demand for $5,000 but other than that it was good tale. |
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