4DXDBr Thanks so much for the article.Much thanks again. Great.

Qo9DRY Thanks for the article post.Really looking forward to read more. Really Great.

jmxsd1 A big thank you for your article.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

l1WYbq Thanks for the post.Really thank you! Great.

KepgLn Thank you ever so for you article post.Really looking forward to read more.

For now it's ok!
But we want to know what will happen with Paul and Patricia.
Please, don't leave us waiting very much time!
Kisses.
Silvia.

A well written story with possibly too much 'chit-chat' going on.  It needs a distinct change of emphasis more often.  The stories, generally, contain annoying spelling errors, usual with American writers, such as 'then' instead of 'than', and the very common usage of 'I' instead of 'me'.  It really spoils the stories.  Why not use a properly educated editor ?
P.S. These comments are not specifically for this writer, but I need to make these points somewhere.

Love the series, i hope it eventually adds more parts

i'd especially love to see the parent scenes

nice story. I like it and LOVE the fact that Roy was thrown
in there so we could see how Patricia could react to some of
the things a woman, especially a TG woman has to deal with
and handle it like a lady. I also am glad Paul came to her
rescue and that both he and Colleen are so supportive of
Patricia. I hope Patricia can tell her parents and that
they can come to understand rather than disown their
beautiful daughter as such a treasure like her would otherwise
be their loss, not hers.

This is a really well written and enjoyable story. I've loved every moment of it. The character development is  wonderful and the dialogue most charming. Thanks for putting Bozo Roy in there as it gave Patricia the opportunity to show her strength and marvelous feminity. I can hardly wait for the next installment.

Good story. I enjoy good things happening to good people.

It good to see the lost soul like Patrick/Patricia has a lot sam to stand up to Roy who is not running on a full head of steam. I ask the question of the phsiography stone about this and life road that we travle. The phsiography stone told me this "life is a trade for a trade" to be wet is to be dry, to be cold is to be warm, to be hungry is to be full, to look death is the face is to see the beauty of the universe. Live To Ride, Ride To Live.  

Very fun, fast moving and lively story Katie.  As always a supportive female like Colleen is a treasure. Enjoyed the shoping scenes and especially Paul and his interest in Patricia.  More on how she really looks would be appreciated.  Being that tiny and hairless she sounds like she could be a knockout but you leave that pretty blank. Truly a lighthearted story even with the bozo Roy and his antics.  Yes I agree with Jezzi Belle most firmly. Thank you so much that Patricia didn't allow herself to be blackmailed or humiliated. If Colleen continues to be supportive and doesn't lose interest, that would be wonderful. Maybe the tables could be turned and Patricia could come to the rescue of Colleen.  Don't know why that came to me but it seems so much is expected of the women and so little given in return.  Yes, I know she has a new best friend but more consideration of Colleen would be nice. She could forseeably get a lot of harrassment from Patricia's parents. They could forbid them living together if they are paying for college. It is not all fun and games.  She is being found out left and right so she might as well go to school as a girl. That would be an exciting read and seems like it's Patricia's destiny.  Thank you for a nice read.  Kristi  

Dear LK,
     You were already pretty high on my list of favorite authors, but you moved into the top group with this scene:  A guy dressed like a girl threatened with exposure if he doesn't give the big jock a blow job - standard so far, but definitely the road less traveled next - "SHE" DOESN'T DO IT!!!  Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you Katie!  I'm looking forward to the next installment; I would like to see her take the bulls by their horns and attend class as Patricia, facing the world proud to be a woman.

Very good my dear love it

Sweet. You might want to check on the difference between site and sight though.

nice story I wish it was as easy!