just the best did not stop reading it till it was done just the best

Goodness i'v read some good work but you top them all. you'v become a favoret of mine. um if you have time i'd love it if you gave  me some addvice

Great story i lost some sleep reading this it was as if it was a book i didn't want to put down. now to explor the experince of  Celeste from before she was picked up by ms. x to current in either rcolections and etc. Also to cover how the "victims" of this story.  


-jdarr

after part 6:
really great story, one of the best, and I certainly enjoyed it from beginning to end!  My only negatives are 1) Everything worked and seemed too easy when dealing with the evil rich, and having the Simons plead "not guilty" seemed unrealistic.  2) Ally and Carol (and the rest)  never seemed to worry about retribution.  If I was in their heels, I would be a little more security conscious and suspicious of things like a surprise dinner.  That wouldn't be paranoia, just common sense.

Will the next story line include Iona?

Dear Julie O,

    This is a truely riviting, edge of the seat & fingernail biting story (the bill for my manicure will be in the mail to you soon).  I was so releived that Beth, Maggie and Steve did not get shelved after "Change of Course", I feel with the right plot this could be a great universe.  

    Oh by the way, the next time Duo-Pages gets shut down by a Trogen virus worm thingy could you have Allies team look into it?

Rose2  

I really wanted for FBI to fail in their mission - perhaps you could write an alternate ending, where they get to the farmhouse, and realize that kidnappers found out the bug and planted it in the wrong farmhouse.

Hi Julie,
  I think your efforts in the ongoing Protector series is really great. It is a great attempt at weaving a transexual story with a thriller and I think the characters and the storyline are coming out pretty well. It is nice and refreshing to see a story where the tv character does a bit more than getting dolled up.
Keep up the good work.

Best, Antara.

Great story and character combination from your previous stories. The characters are very involving. You want it to turn out well for the good guys. I'm really enjoying it.

Juile,

Like others I think this is a wonderful blend of two different amazing stories as well as a nice nod to a third story line.   The villians Ms X is wonderful and the transformations she effects on her captives equally amazing.   The details of what she does both mentally as well as physically to them sends a cold shiver down my spin.   As I mentioned in my e-mail to you I hope that you might allow us to revist Ms X's dark and scarry world and travel down the very dark path of one of her subjects from his capture as a happy young male with dreams of college and a future life to his shocking capture and reshaping at MS X's hands.   Allow us to see him/her enter into life as a submissive she-male French speaking maid with dreams of servicing her new owners filling the core of her mind and then to her stunning rescue four years later.   But more importantly how her rescue and return to her love ones from her male life will react and the healing process to blend her damaged soul back into their lives and restore her old dreams of college and a future after that.   As many have said you've tapped gold here Julie and can't wait for part four to see how Ms X will try to break Beth and how she will deal with the suprises Beth and Ally have cooked up for her.  Somehow I doubt she will go down easy!!

-J-

I just finished part 1.....very well written - great character development - can't wait to additional episodes.  Thanks for the effort.

I really like your long-term plan for your stories.  Now if you can just get Iona involved, too ...    

I've been waiting for a new story for weeks. Glad it's arrived at last.

 Wow!  Another Blockbuster!  Girl, I am really getting addicted to your FBI stories.  I never knew the bureau was so liberal.  
Thanks for the good read.  I enjoyed all of it, from the moment I started to the final conclusion.  
Although this story was not exactly about Beth, she did play a pivital role in the outcome of the story.
Keep them coming.  
                                  Thanx..........Rickki.

When's the next part going to be ready?

Nice well written story and to good to read off a d*mmed PC screen , (going to have to get another printer cartridge)

Thanks Julie

Nice blending of alternate chracters.  Adds a nice to twist to the story, now to see where it goes.  Can't wait for the next episode!
Diane