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Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/02/04
Jane, Comment by Mysti on 01/01/04 I have to agree with the other reviewers. Your writing style has improved some since your first effort, but not enough. I guess the difference is like that between a train wreck where all the cars go off the track, and a wreck where only half of them go off. You have some good story ideas, but you desperately need help in putting them into readable form. PLEASE GET AN EDITOR! Comment by Axanar on 12/31/03 I normally don't pick apart writing, but as much as I like your stories, you desperately need an editor. Your ideas are good but your prose leaves much to be desired. Jezzi's remarks are dead on target. You also tend to confuse such things as colors and so forth. I would take some time and really look over my stories and try to catch those problems before hand. Comment by Pervette on 12/31/03 Once again I have to agree with Jezzi. (The rumors that we are one Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/31/03 Dear Jane, Comment by Paula on 12/31/03 well descriptive and sweet story dear. You're a good writer because you write from the heart. |
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