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Come On Baby Light My Pilot
by JoEllen Lynn

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Comment by Royal CBD on 11/18/20
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Comment by best pron on 10/26/19
Dx5dlG Wow, great article.Really thank you! Will read on

Comment by chocopie on 12/20/18
wHbIIt Way cool! Some very valid points! I appreciate you penning this post and also the rest of the website is extremely good.

Comment by crorkz on 08/04/14
hKTWV2 Looking forward to reading more. Great article.Much thanks again. Fantastic.

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 05/03/01
Very interesting and refreshingly different, there is plenty of scope for this to develop into something special. keep at it.

Comment by frances el on 01/09/01
Now HERE'S a great beginning!! This is a new approach that has promise, promise, PROMISE!!  JoEllen, PLEASE do more with this - you've got the base for a wonderful story that can have so many plot twists, turns, and double-backs it'll keep us all spell bound while we read it!!

Thanks for this one!!
fran

Comment by Marti B on 01/08/01
I like the style but I felt a little let down that there wasn't more substance to the story.  I hope you keep writing but try to make each of the parts a little longer.  I felt that this was more of an introductory section than a true first part of the story.

Comment by paul jutras on 01/08/01
well written and good character though not my taste in storyline.



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