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Come, Sing My Song
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by Stanley Morton on 08/05/07
Brandy, I love the Image you have for the poor mermaid "Celeste" ,I have to admit though, My romantic heart hopes she finds the escape she craves. Yes Brandy for the first time, I am crying for one of your characters. My your Muse forever shine.

Comment by Eleanor on 09/02/05
I love this story...one of the best stories on here, in my view.Thank you for writing it. :)

Comment by Languish on 11/08/04
I keep getting a strong feeling of anxiety every time I begin to think of being alone that long.  Maybe it's because I'm a Libra and we are just social people.  This is a great story and it invoked a very stong sense of pity for Celeste, being alone all that time. PAIN!!  Good story.

Comment by Knightshifter on 02/11/03
Keep me apprised of the seuil. I loved this story! Sad ending though as Celeste was left all alone.

Fran kly, my life sucks and would gladly find delight if this sort of thing happened to me. Being a Mermaid and being with another one. I'd have nothing to return to, so I'd gladly stay.

Great story! :)

Comment by K. Kitsune on 03/19/02
oooh I loved your Mermaid story, so much so that it inspired me to write a Sequal to it.  I'll e-mail ya when I get it a bit more done.



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