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Comment by Mariah on 05/23/13
Good one Janet, I liked it. Comment by Trying to Understand on 03/28/09 I just started reading this story again and I noticed an inconsistency. When the narrator was upset with the comments by his boss he mentioned his father, mother, four sisters, a brother and himself making a family of 8 individuals. Then when he talks about his crossdressing as a teenager he states he was an only child. It can't be both. I would like to see this corrected for future readers. Other than this obvious error, I think the story was wonderful. I think sometimes in the "heat of the moment" while writing, one can lose track of some of the facts of the story. Please take this as a constructive critism to help in the cotinuity of the story. Thanks for letting me express my comments. Continue to write your wonderful stories as I have read them all. Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/22/07 JANET, WE WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT HERE, YOU KEEP ON WRITING STORIES THAT I WANT YOU TO CONTINUE. Comment by Kate aka kenneth phillips on 12/03/02 Very proper. Comment by Jennifer on 12/02/02 Janet, Comment by Starhawk on 12/01/02 One of your better endeavours Janet. A hearty well done! Comment by Supey on 11/30/02 You should have demoted the boss. |
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