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The Condition
by Fear's Edge

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Comment by suba me on 12/20/18
22pgYA It as nearly impossible to find knowledgeable people on this subject, but you sound like you know what you are talking about! Thanks

Comment by Aleesha on 01/09/11
Could have been developes more.

Comment by Mr. Ram on 12/12/01
Good story, no spelling errors this time. I don't think it needs to be continued, you had a pretty good ending.
Mr. Ram

Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 12/12/01
Very good. Sexy as all get out.





























Very good. Thank you,























































Very good. Thank you, Sally.  


















       

Comment by Orpheus on 12/11/01
Good beginning, I like the concept, please continue writing!

Comment by Paula Jutras on 12/11/01
Makes me think of the first time the main character in the TG comic FUTABA-KUN CHANGE first changed in the bathroom. Wonderful story and love to see you continue it.



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