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Confluence
by Denise Em

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Comment by Gretta P. on 02/22/14
Quite a different musing. ÊI liked it. Êalso have enjoyed your other stories.

Comment by TeriLynn on 01/10/08
You really need to develope this more!  The male view needs to be said as to what he was thinking when his eyes met hers.  Either as a silent viewpoint of "I wonder what this woman is looking at? Do I know her? Is there something wrong with something I'm wearing?" or He just openly ask her these things, but since he is so shy He just might ask "Hi, do I know you?"  

Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/05/06
Good

Comment by Keera on 12/01/06
Wonderful story from another "point-of-view". Not well know way of telling a story, but quite effective.
Have you thought of continueing the story either from the mans "point-of-view" or from her view point?
Keep going. You are doing well.



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