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The Connection
by Amanda McCree

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Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 04/29/11
Hi Amanda.
Good story.
Gretchen and Sylvia could be police officers, doing undercover investigation, and they could be male officers doing a dangerous criminal investigation where they need to do this as women, they are the good guys, but Gretchen can be afraid, because she has no experience. She is a begginer.
And the man who is watching Gretchen, will help the two women in the criminal investigation. He is a nice guy.
That might work!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by john on 06/12/08
WHAT NOW??/ GO ON < GO ON

Comment by Amanda McCree on 07/08/05
How would you like to see the story develop?  I'm open to your ideas.  I haven't decided who will be the good guy or bad guy.  It will be interesting to see what happens next.

Cheers,
Amanda McCree

Comment by Dorothy on 06/30/05
I am in awe of your story!  I'd like to hear the rest.  You are a college student?  Wow

Comment by SassySue on 05/15/05
Yes, we'd love to see this continued.It's well written and a different slant to this point.

SS

Comment by Windy on 05/08/05
This story seems incomplete.  Are there more chapters to come?



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