A truly uplifting episode. I really hope you will finish the story for us. I loved the way you switched between the two characters and made their conflicting emotions credible and moving. I also liked the way there was no explicit sex with excruciating gynaecological details. That is what ruins so many TS stories for me.

I love your story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks for the uplifting outlook, all the best.

Dear Laura,

Another great story. I like the two first-person style that you used. I do hope you visit this website again. You do write very well and you bring in all the details so very well. However since this was written in August of 2000 and this is March of 2003, perhaps you don't visit anymore and that would be a shame. I like three out of your four stories. It's too bad, that your e-mail is no longer working. You won't get to read all the praise that you so well deserve. Perhaps you're having too much fun out in the world as a girl to take the time to write.

your #1 fan,

Susan

I really enjoyed this story: well written, interesting plot device, and engaging characters. Bring on Part 2!

OMG!!!!! that is such a sweet story!!!!!!!!! the addition of a female reaction to this story gives it a wonderful new view into the emotions beyond the surface. it is romantic and exciting and oh dear! so sweet it made me cry!

Wonderful story ! Wish we could all have that type of
experience(at least once). Looking forward to the next
chapter in "The Dress" <smile>
Michelle

I have been a keen reader of CD stories for some time, but have not responded to invitations to comment before. I reall enjoyed this story - it is very sympathetically told, and deals well with the problems encountered in shopping for clothes when you're filled with fear and trepidation. I read this story when it was first posted, and have re-read it a couple of times, enjoying it as much as the first time. Please write the next part soon.