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The Conscripted Bridesmaid
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Comment by Silvia. (from Brazil) on 04/29/11
Hi Alyssa. Comment by Barbara on 12/05/07 Good story, well constructed. Has many sounds of truth and honesty about it. Comment by Barbara on 12/05/07 Good story, well constructed. Has many sounds of truth and honesty about it. Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 07/27/03 Fun story Alyssa. Thank you so much for a real kind group especially sis. It was a quick read but rewarding. Hugs Kristi Comment by Fredrikka Joy on 04/26/02 This was a well written story. And well edited too, compared to some I've seen. Well done. Comment by Jane Hudson on 03/03/02 Love your story fab I totaly enjoyed it my dear.Another great story of sister and brother living and helping him being feminmine . Comment by Carolyn Baxter on 02/08/02 Thank you Alyssa. You really are sensitive to a story line that is thrilling to read but only wished for. Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/22/01 Here again is a showcase of the talents of this author. Another top notch story where Alyssa shows us her more than ample writing skills. A story that will likely give many readers a reason for looking at her other wonderful tales. Comment by Caitlin Rose on 08/16/01 Very well done. I like stories like this, where the transformation is an act of joy, rather than an act of compulsion. The external self is allowed to come into alignment with the internal. Isn't it something that most of us wish for? Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 08/15/01 Terrific story. As you suggested, it's hard to come up with an |
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