Very bad.

Well I love stories of female control but I hate stories that dwell on and encourage sadism and pain.  But I love stories that trick a man into taking hormones too..mu experienc with that was with a very sweet woman who had the urge to watch her sissy emerge but had no reason to be sneaky about it.. but then again the horror and thrill of wondering why you cry more and have moods and feel sensations in your breasts is a good read.  a month for this to happen is too short but fantasies have no time line  I liked reading it and had a tad of a mess to clean up half way through..thanks

Excellent treatment of Phil by Rachel -- I will be employing a few of Mistress Rachel's techniques on my sissy maid Priscilla Ann.Thanks for the marvelous story and the emergence of Pam. And, of course, the punishment of Kerry. She did, after all, deserve it.

I think that while the month was interesting, making it permanent? Well...it should have hurt the relationship a lot more. His reaction to that seemed rather forced 'oh well. I like it'. Hmmm...do you understand sugar? If he was going to accept it there should have been more reasons for it.

Now he has a 'Mistress' who is drunk on power. Not a lover. Never a lover. A lover treats you as an equal, not a slave. I couldn't see any love there at all.

A wonderfully enjoyable story filled with twists (some expected and some not so).  A delightful read which showed to prove that what people say, do or even appear as in public may not reflect the person they are inside, or wish to become.

Well done ;-)

a brilliant story of revenge &exploitation as well as the desire to continue after the month had finished well done excellent

Well the man certainly comes out of this story looking better than any of the women - an honorable man of good character.  The women are all sadists and the girlfriend is a dishonorable welsher as well.  Even if she hadn't pulled the "This is permanent." bit on him, I think he still should have walked - no reason to stay with a loveless woman of low character, and staying with her would, in the long run, be far worse than the temporary fallout from her blackmail:  On a month plus a couple of seconds, "Do your worst, bitch, I'm outta here."

well he certanly made a fool of himself agreeing to the bet in the first place i was very suprised he took it so mldly butwas shocked when he relised that this would be a perminant way instesad of his month kerry went to far in extracting revenge but a woman scorned is a woman hurt and revenge is what they give back in the worstpossible way the part about hte tatoo is a brilliant twist to the story well doneand ecellent story more to come please