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Consequences
by Belle Gordon

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Comment by brandie on 12/09/12
i realy injoyed "consequeneces" i did not expect the twist and turns of the story, i thought i'd find another boring sex book, instead i was drawn into it by good discriptions of events, making me wounder what was next. it was a good mystery story. thanks,

Comment by Silvia. on 11/14/10
Very bad story!

Comment by ashley on 08/31/10
Nicely done.

Comment by phil69 on 10/04/09
  Your story was wonderful and well written.  It was completely accurate as you described how the lad was drawn to his moms room, and to try on all her things.  How he was attracted to his Aunt/Mom, and the seduction that took place.  Thanks for the article.

Comment by Rachel E on 01/23/09
Your storie was excellant and i would like to see where you would take it if you were to continue with Sir Davids wife in the storey of the Consequences. With what you had done up tp the point of his death you need to go back to his mother/auntie and possable to includ Sir Davids wife and son..
Rachel E
Spokane Wa

Comment by Abbie on 03/01/08
A truly believable story- twisted and shocking but believable.

Comment by Pauline Brendon on 09/03/07
I have read your other two stories and given you my opinion. Got your e-mail yesterday, thank you.
This one is exceptional! Please keep them coming Belle. Most of the other tales on this site are mundane and very similar to each other. I can only think of one other writer who has the same  standard you have,  but  will not name her. I would love to have your three stories in a leather bound bound omnibus so I can put it on my bookshelf and read it over and over again.  
Thank you so much for giving me such enjoyment.

Lots of love,

Pauline  xxxxxxxxx


Comment by Aine on 06/24/07
A truly well written story.  I like the touch of fetishism, I think you should write a continuation to the storyline, perhaps bringing it full circle.

Comment by Geena Beth White on 12/19/06
I just love Belle Gordon's stories.  Being a long time CD gal, I love any stories like hers that include CD girls wearing lovely feminine clothes with the help of either mother's, aunts, sisters, wives or girlfriends.  MMmmmmmmm!  Especially if they are X-rated!

Comment by jill m i on 08/25/06
What a truly unique story. The twist and turns were delightful.

It reminded me of "Tom Jones."

It is unfortunate that thoughtful, carefully written stories like this receive so little attention, while poorly crafted stories are lavished with praise.

Jill




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