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Constant in All Other Things
by Bob

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Comment by Karen on 03/21/17
A complex and rivetting story that really took me into the world of David and Cindy. An exceptionally well written work that thoughtfully covered the dilemmas of discovering one's gender identity on top of a cracking thriller. Any chance of Book 2?

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Comment by Erica on 10/03/12
Great story. Only a few authors manage to get that bridge between fact and fiction so the characters remain believable while their lives are changing. The way Dick both hates and loves Cindy is really well done. I hope you pick this up again.

Comment by Woods on 11/11/08
Good story! What happens next?  inquiring minds want to know.

Comment by Yoron on 05/28/08
Incredibly good.
Your mastery of the English language left nothing to chance.
And your fighting scenes at the end were exquisite :)
This was a very good novel.

I hope you haven't stopped writing.
That would be a shame.

Sincerely so.
Yoron.


Comment by Gwen Brown on 01/10/07
This is a really compelling story. You aren't gonna leave us hanging are ya?

Gwen


Comment by Cherry on 09/19/06
This is easily the best story I've ever read on this site and I've been here a long time. In fact this story is so good I wish you'd write a script and make it into a movie. The characters are so real and interesting. Fantastic storytelling , I love all the back-stories. Keep it up!

Comment by Danielle Richards on 09/17/06
Bob,
  A riveting, compelling series. I just love the foreshadowing at beginning. I hope to see more of Cindy. We all should know from reading between the lines that she is the real heroine of this saga. I hope we won't have to wait too long for season two.

  A very well done story. I could watch the movie in my head as I read. That takes great skill to write a narative that descriptive.

                Congradulations,

                                   Danielle


Comment by Cristina on 06/23/06
Enthralling, very well written - can't wait for the next instalment

Comment by Beardy on 06/12/06
I had put this one to one side. What a mistake!
Very good story so-far, and looking forward to part 5.
I'm not sure that all the high-teck stick-on parts are necessary,
but maybe that will come out in the wash?
Or not...
But if you have any of that throat spray left over... :-)


Comment by anonymus on 06/09/06
Nice story ! Very well worked out plot. I like to read it to the end.

Thank you Bob

Comment by Kristy Lynn Fitzpatrick on 06/07/06
   The story is starting to heat up and looking good. Obviously there was alot of set up and it has been put to good use. I do not see anything unusual at all about the main character's attitude. I work next to more macho and crass men on a daily basis. These men say these things out loud as well. I am sure they think much more obnoxious thoughts in their heads.

   Thank you for sharing I am taking it all in and enjoying the read. Thank you.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

Comment by phil on 05/29/06
Compelling story can't wait to find out the next twist

Comment by lisa a on 05/29/06
not to bad looking forward to more

Comment by christina di P on 05/28/06
this fucking prick is making me sick with all his set up masculine attitude. I wish he hadn't survived his first shooting. depraved guys like this one are the poison on this earth !

Comment by Alice Digsit on 05/27/06
Well, Bob,
Really nicely written, lovely internal struggles, intriguing characters, nice layered psychology, and even though I hate stories with lots of episodes, can't help it, I'm on the edge of my seat for the next one.

Great stuff.  

Many thanks.
Alice

Comment by Sophie on 05/27/06
I can't believe no one has commented on this good story. It has a plot and it's not obvious where the story turns. I read it and so far loved it. Great work.



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