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by Jennifer White

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Comment by Scuba Steve on 12/03/06
Jezzi, I have seen you criticize so many of Jennefer's stories, I finally had to say something.  I rarely leave a comment because I doubt Ms. White reads reviews to stories this old, but I finally felt compelled to.  I think I remember you leaving one positive comment for one of her stories and flamed the rest.  I just have one question - why do you read them?  Her stories aren't your cup of tea.  Move on.  It's fiction.  It never happened.  However, some guys love this stuff and would like to meet a girl just like Kathy.

I love these kind of stories.  I would rather see the guy be turned into a lesbian, but I totally get off on the transformations.  If you want Ms. White to improve her grammar or get her facts straight, fine, leave a comment.  But don't try to get her to change her writing style, because some of us really, really like it!!


Comment by Rone Welles on 10/31/06
  wow what a crazy story   different thats for shure ..well written
and showed the author has a mind that thinks outside the box...
thank you for shareing       XO Rone

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/10/05
Murder most foul!  I hate it when the bad girl wins



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