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Convergence
by Slothrop

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Comment by rone on 01/23/06
different,,, clean ,,,strange ,,,thought provocking ,,,uneeeeeeek  
but  worth the time ....thank you  ,,, rone

Comment by solon on 04/10/04
The Convergence

This story take the cake…or rather it takes liberty  with perceived reality: aka the cake. Once we start to read it, the story does make finishing it necessary, because a reader would feel  the patterning, a ‘groundhog day’ –like variation,  reinforces our knowledge that we truly are authors of our own fate, at least in terms of dress! The main character experiences his emergence as a crossdresser at same time as the other boys also adapt the new fangled reality the new day presents. He goes along with it because it’s normal; although he had experimented in earlier times with wearing women’s clothes, he had been horrified of getting caught. The story allows plenty of room for each reader to embellish to personal satisfaction, until in final scene the choice appears limitless, which is not only freaky, but unsettling. Thank gad for the laws of physics!

Comment by Monk on 03/20/04
Great story. Original idea and well written, I wish there were more stories like this one.



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