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This is a very enjoyable story which has two elements I really like. 1)It is essentially a "real world" story with a plot. And 2) His Mummy and Naomi are gentle and loving as long as he behaves. Even then the spankings and discipline are loving.

DISGUSTING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dear Bea,
I so enjoyed your story that I was confused with my own stories and erroneously called Rayan John.
Please forgive me
Love Priscellia

I enjoyed your story no end and hope that you can add a poscscript about the wedding and honeymoon.
Some more details about the delicate training of the heroine would have added to the development of the lovely John and how he was trained to perfect his/her makeup and feminine walk in high heels.

Do write some more stories.
Love and huggs
Priscellia

Loved the story. I wish to read more about Melissa if you write anymore

This one was mean ugly.
That guy didn't have a chance.
What you are advertising here as his predisposition is just a figment of  a sick fantasy.
Sometimes i wish someone would give those characters some guts and a good handgun.
Life in prison can't be worse than what he's being handed here.

Yoron.

HI, bea loved your story, and the fact you used pretty frilly aprons in the story, I wished more writers used pretty aprons in there storys. Its sad that aprons are arent used more often, I do hope you will incorperate aprons as much as possible in future storys, thanks CINDY.

a brilliant story of the females whiles &changing a boy into a girl without any problems well done agreat storey

What agreat treat, another lovely story and another author who writes the kind of stories that I live so much and keep me so excited as I read them.  Another pair of messy pink panties to wash out tonite.  Im going to be reading all the stories of yours that I run into, and I will be looking for them.  I just love it and you for writing the stories that I get into.  more  more   Love and kisses   XXOXOXO  Sissy Phyll.

Such an enthralling story from start to finish, Like some body else said before the method of transformation is truly wonderful. I'm so jealous.I'll just have to keep on reading.

                Hugs    &     Kisses

                     Kathryn.

i just absolutely luved this story! <3 its so good i get wet in my panties everytime i read it.

I do so miss your site Bea, and it was wonderful to find one of your stories here which I hadn't read for quite some time. I just love your writing and this story is especially full of great descriptions and details! A wonderful feminization adventure tale!

Gina

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story.  The method of his transformation was delightful.

Vanessa

Great story wish I was her in the story lucky girl

Bea
This story as allof yours is great.  Ivitied your website and made up a list of five stories I wanted to purchase but alas I guess you had already turned the store off.  You are a great  writer and I have koved allof your stories.  I hope to find you on this site and fictionmania in the years to come.
diana

I got into this story quite easy it was well writtten and a nother perfect set up it seems mother wanted a daughter not a son

I couldn't get into this one. From what little I did read he was set up and betrayed by his mother. And the catagory was wrong it should have been good boy to good girl, his being bad was a figment of his mother's imagination.

Hi Bea, thanks for this wonderful story. As a longtime fan of your writing I knew this story already from your own website. Never the less I enjoyed reading it once again. Keep up your nice writing and IŽm sure youŽll make lots of girls happy.

Gail

Lovely story with a nice sensual twist. I hope that there are others coming. Love & Kisses