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Cousin Virgil
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/10/11
It's better for Jesse to be a girl than go to jail.
He was responsible for his current situation!
Good work.

Comment by eric on 07/17/10
i must say i liked it a lot keep up the good work

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/21/05
I liked this, although I thought the ending was rushed.  I think it would have been more interesting and less predictable if Jess had tried an escape OR there had been a few paragraphs on when he was castrated and some rebellio0n at that point as the realization of the failing of HIS plan brought Jess back to the foreground - sort of like the Battle of the Bulge in WWII.  I also thought too much mental change was attributed to hormones to be realistic; from what I've read, for example, female hormones by themselves don't automatically change ones sexual orientation.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 02/07/04
Just love the story my dear

Comment by Stephanie Manzi on 01/21/03
I've just finished reading several of your stories and I found them to be very interesting and entertaining. I particulary enjoyed your "Cousin Virgil" I found myself yearning to have that happened to me when I was a young teenager, alas it wasn't to be . Still it brought a smile to my face and a happy memory of spending a summer at my aunt's home in Vermont. I look forward to more stories by you.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 03/27/02
It's beyond me why some of the stories I read have no reader comments on them. This author is a very prolific writer and she has shown a talent for this type of writing.

I enjoyed this story along with others that she has done. This one where the cousin is changed into a female is another example of her writing skills.



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