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Cowboy and Indians
by Jim Rossi

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Comment by Pippa K. on 10/23/04
Pretty hardcore bondage/humiliation stuff.  Would have been nice if the story somehow justified it.  Cowboys and Indians can be a fun game, amongst consensual participants, anyways.  Throwing in non-consensual brandings and piercings, rape, and imprisonment might offend some readers -- it certainly left me cold -- but that's not even the main problem here.  You somehow manage all this hard-core action without as much as paying lipservice to eroticism.  Next story, think erotic first, then fit in the action.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/23/04
We as readers should be angry with Mike, he did, after all, try to abuse Julia.  However, the womens' punishment of him was so far beyond fitting the crime that Mike becomes the abused victim and the women, including his so called friend, Lisa, become evil bitches.  He attempted a rape of Julia while drunk.  She actually did rape him while cold sober, on top of everything else that had been done to him.  



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