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Crasher
by Jennifer White

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Comment by SassySue on 01/03/06
P.S.  2 minor nits: for some reason the word "dildo" is often misspelled in Jennifer's stories.  She also needs to brush up on the difference between "to" and "too" and use them correctly.

Comment by SassySue on 01/03/06
I disagree with the previous reviewer.  This story was great and highly erotic!  It punched a lot of my buttons.  I wish I was in Adam's place.

Just like in Vicky Tern's stories, it doesn't matter whether Adam thought of himself as hetero or homo; TV or TS.  He found a strong woman who knew what she wanted and after being forced into it Adam discovered that he liked it too.  

However, I do agree that this story could have been much longer and included more about the nature of Diane's feelings for Adam and Adam's gradual transformation into Shannon on a full time basis.  Maybe we'll get a sequel.

Jennifer, keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by a guy on 01/02/06

a semi-femdom story.  the guy is a submissive crossdresser.  he gets found out by a DOM girl.  end of story.  no follow up.

and that is the problem.  it is more of a submission story than a transgender one.  is he a tranny?  or just crossdresser for sex?  does he want to be a woman?  does the girl care about him at all, or is this all a powertrip?

nothing is explored.  just the meeting & sex.  kinda blah.




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