Where is the end of the story?

Need. More. Please.

Just read your writing, enjoyed it immensely, but.....it needs to have part deux...this is October 29, 2005 and I am having a strange day.the stories I have chosen to read are all continuations and have not been continued. Please, please, add part deux, so some of us can have soem relief.  If its a serial add part three also, I like the story line,a nd how Rick and his mom have just bonded as mother daughter.
Jill

Excellent story and your writing craft is outstanding.  You have the talent to keep the reader interested throughout.  I certainly hope that you keep going with this tale - and soon.  I am anxious to learn what is next.

This is a great story.  I can't wait to read the next portion.

i love these realistic characters. they remind me of people i had known. the relationships are nicely drawn, a good mix of everyday with a touch of deeper darker currents. adolescence is like that.

Nice story, you are working on more , arn'tyou?

thanks

Very good. You did not bog down in the explanation of the transformation and I suggest you not bother. Now what will happen? His parents would no doubt seek medical attention. But that would be a major news item. Can it be kept secret? Will he be able to transform back in the creek?  But most importantly of all, when is he going to have to put on a dress? I cannot wait.

Ann

Whoah!  Mom's reaction was gut-wrenchingly great.  You got talent, kid!  Good empathy throughout.  Great story, nicely done.  Now, just how exactly are we supposed to wait for the next part!  :-)

I like it. It's interesting and I'm a fan of partial transformations like this one. Keep it coming.