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Crime and Punishment
by Jason M

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Comment by ashley on 12/08/10
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Comment by Dianna on 04/20/08
I would love to see the psychological consequences of this.

Comment by juliej on 07/20/07
I stand by my previous comments

Comment by julie j on 07/22/05
a hot story of revenge and punishment it woul have been better for it to be explained a bit more but overall great story well done

Comment by stephanie on 08/25/04
This had to be one of the hotest stories I have ever read.  This is one of my biggest fantasies.  I would love to read more stories just like this one.  

I've always wanted to serve some college guys while dressed in a sexy outfit.

Thanks for writting such an excellent story.

Comment by Brandi on 08/24/04
I personally really loved this story though I must say I felt it ended to quickly.  I am very interested to find out what happened to him after the cab dropped him off.  

I suppose I also enjoyed this story because I have had fantasies of being dressed very sexy and pleasing large groups of men.

Anyways I really enjoyed the story, I liked what the girls did which could have went to far but didn't and I liked how you played on the attitude of frat guys.

I hope you might continue this story in the future.  I would love to read when he ends up in a month time.  Does he go back to being a normal college guy or does he end up being a whore for some pimp downtown.



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