lovely gentle story of hidden longing fulfilled

lovely story, but I would have liked them to continue longer in there roles. Bring on the follow-up

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What a lovely, wishful and romantic story, even if it is a little too far fetched. The big disappointment is at the end when they do not go back to their original selves, with a new understanding of the opposite sex, where life would be much more fulfilling and realistic, and in the long term, happier. 'The grass is always greener' is a very apt expression.

While this story is well written, and ends well - according to the child - I question the justification in forcing any young boy to cross-dress simply because of misbehavior. What happened to parental responsibilities. If this type of punishment is acceptable, why aren't we imposing it on the career criminals in jails or parents who can't set a good example. As for the mother, her decision to change her SON by falsely presenting him with (what he believed to be) allergy pills was wrong, and she and the doctor should be prosecuted for their plot against the boy. Many of the stories read seem to end too smoothly and with too much happiness from the targeted victim. The plot is normally carried out by the mother and other FEMALE relatives, with little active involvement by any fathers, grandfathers, uncles, etc. Where's their active role, or do they simply not support such an act. What's done with rebellious girls - you can't crossdress them. They already enjoy girls' and boys' clothing. News stories often end up with the individual whose sex was changed (without their knowledge) end up being miserable.

Karen Elizabeth,you have put tears in my old eyes again !!Medically far fetched but you made it believable and that is a sign of a top writer .Once again ,many thanks and God bless.ALISON
PS Thanks for the acknowledgement.

I liked the story, but I don't agree with the threats that her aunt has made to her. But I loved the story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

A great story, it was always on the cards that Jim and Jamie were going to love their new genders and you told it very well. Thanks.

Alovely gentle story which appealed to my soft feminine side Rosemary

Another in a line of great stories from a talented author here on storysite.
I feel like I could have been the boy changing into a lovely girl within your story. I liked the use of hypnotic CD's to change the thinking and mannerisms of the boy and girl.
I hope to read your other fine works soon and, I'm sure that they will be just as good.
Diane

The initial "male foolhardiness" in accepting any kind of dare is very nice as is the revelation that it might be more fun to be a girl. Not to mention to find out that the cousin (ex-girl) would rather stay as a boy!

Really pleasant story to read!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball

another fine story that was truely a pleasure to read.  The concept of twins male and female is always a story interest with me. Especially cousins since I never had brothers or sisters,