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Crossing Your X's and Dotting Your Y's
by Young_Ovidius

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Comment by Hotfoot on 01/05/04
I agree with Jess. I would have liked the story to continue, and their problems living with swapped genetalia explored further.

This was a good, original piece of work at first, but then it became just another everyday, seen one you seen them all story.

Explore the unique.

Keep writing.

You are good.

Comment by Jess Arita on 01/04/04
It's a shame to have the story end so abruptly, but I enjoyed it a lot while it lasted.  Just once I'd like to see a partial body swap story where the couple stays that way, though.

Comment by Young Moe on 11/04/03
I don't really think having a pussy would make you crave cock, but that's just me.

I don't think sexual orientation has anything to do with genitalia.

Comment by homer on 10/26/03
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Comment by CHRIS on 10/25/03
WHERE IS PART 4??????

Comment by Gizelle on 10/22/03
This is an excellent story. But I was disappointed that Part 4 has been posted incorrectly. It is Part 3 repeated. Hopefully that can be corrected ASAP.

The idea that a couple can swap their genitals is very titillating. But I find the unique format a bit confusing. The switching of the character telling the story in the first person enables some interesting thoughts to be exploited. Maybe the change of narrator can be handled a little differently and in a way that transitions between characters leaving no doubt who is doing the thinking. I know you give the name of the person, but maybe the story can also reinforce the identity of the narrator.

The way this story develops is intriguing. I canít wait for Part 4 to be posted correctly and then to read the continuation of this amazing story.

Comment by Susan on 10/21/03
How come Part 3 has been submitted again instead of Part 4.
Can't wait for the next part.

Comment by Sim Male on 10/20/03
There are not enough stories like this, very very good story, please keep it coming

Comment by Jess Arita on 10/19/03
There aren't enough partial body swap stories, and most of those become total body swaps before the story's over.  I'm really enjoying this one after the first three chapters.

Comment by Justin Timberlake on 10/19/03
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Comment by Josephus III on 10/10/03
Keep it up, as this is exactly the kind of story myself and other genital swap fans love. I look forward to reading of many ackward situations and circumstances involving these two people.

Comment by shy surfer on 09/27/03
Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work.

Comment by Kimmie on 09/25/03
It is a very nice story really with plenty of detail of how the people feels as far as emotions are concerned. However I do find the format of the names and switching back to each is detrimental to maintaining train of thought and concentration on the story .A more free flowing format I do think would greatly enhance this story and hold the interest and concentration of the reader better.

Comment by Paula on 09/23/03
Makes me think of Role Over. A good tale here please continue

Comment by Josephus III on 09/23/03
This is my kind of story. Keep it just like it is, and deal with how the two seemingly normal people cope with their newfound equipment. How can he hide what he has to his coworkers? How can she do the same?

I love tales of genital swaps!



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