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Cross The Hall Dressing
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Richtea on 11/17/15
As it rambled along , it seemed like the 'usual', and unfulfilled ending was due. What a clever ending (yet apropos) that surprised me and gave an uplifting pleasure. Well done, well done.

Comment by this is me on 07/27/12
I so liked this one. Just one catch... he brought her flowers and a bottle of wine. There is NO WAY that could have been missed or misinterpreted. I could be wrong though but that should have at least given her a bit of doubt about what his intention was.

Though she seemed clueless as to his intentions that was an important part of the story because it illustrates the problem that most failed relationships run into: lack of communication.


Comment by juliej on 05/03/08
this was a brilliant story some great charector and style brilliant i hope that you continue to write these stories all of the ones i have read a re great ,i do not like the magical transformation stories but the rest brilliant you are very talented thankyou



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