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Cross Training
by Karen Elizabeth L.

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Comment by Intan on 01/06/13
Between me and my husband we've owned more MP3 plaerys over the years than I can count, including Sansas, iRivers, iPods (classic & touch), the Ibiza Rhapsody, etc. But, the last few years I've settled down to one line of plaerys. Why? Because I was happy to discover how well-designed and fun to use the underappreciated (and widely mocked) Zunes are.

Comment by Alison Mary on 08/04/09
A great story darling,but remember that the taking of hormones without
the guidance of a good endoctrinoligist is very dangerous and not to
be recomended.None the less.enjoyable as always.God bless and thankyou

Comment by Silvia. on 05/09/09
Good story, I liked it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by june on 04/27/08
very cute story do you think you can just pop a pill into some one and it's going to change them, if your belive system is male it's going to stay male!! yes there will be depression, mopping,and even a chance of the big one.how would mummy feel?can you see her going into his room one morning to find his body. with a note saying I can't live this way...

Comment by rone welles on 02/26/07
  Well done what a good story and done in good taste .  no smutt
is a sign of a great author and story teller ...

thank you for sharing .... xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox  Rone :)


Comment by julie j on 07/28/05
very good story bad boy good girl great ring to it but all are different well done great storty

Comment by Jame Hudson on 12/30/03
Very cute story loved it

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/08/03
I read this story late at night, the same night as "The Tomboy Tapes.  The appology I wrote for my comments to that story goes for this one too:
karen, I am sorry and I do appologize.  My comments below were out of line.  I should know better by now than to read very late at night.  Your stories are VERY well written and I get overly involved.
     again, I apologize
              Jezzi

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/07/03
When his mom said, "You'll have to live someplace else."  he should have said "OK"  and see if she would actually let him go.  He certainly didn't put up much of a fight.

I would have liked to see what would have happened if , when he returned from camp he had told his mom how he really felt, promising to be a good boy.  Would she have done the reasonable thing and given him a second chance as a boy with the threat of returning to girlhood hanging over him, or would she be the road-most-traveled-in-TGfiction bitch  mom and force him somehow to remain a girl?

Comment by eric on 09/22/03
I've enjoyed this story a lot ever since I read it on the Nifty site a couple of years back.  I wouldn't call it skillfully written or plotted -- Karen's later stories are much better in that regard.  (In fact, when I saw the 2001 date on the title page I thought this might be an updated version.  It's not; the old date's still at the end of the story.)  But it's fun, and I'm glad to see it again.

Comment by g on 07/06/03
I thought that I had read this story before and sure enough I had. howsomeever it could stand and deserves a sequel.

Comment by julie on 03/20/03
a brilliant story well written I would have liked to see a bit more arguments from mark about it all I could imagine what it felt like to find at the new house my bedroom was as a girls with clothes to match I would have also liked to see a bit more enforcement in the story and humiltion and a bit more punishement but a great story I look forward to reading more in due course

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/20/01
another enjoyable story concept.



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