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The Crucible
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/30/13
Another great story made possible by a parent that wants her child to be happy at all cost, a critical element that unfortunately  is often missing from real life.

Comment by Ronnie on 10/19/09
If wishes were horses, beggars would ride, and I'd be a girl, too, just like Susan.
A sweet story; just what I was looking for.

Comment by Aleesha on 05/06/09
I always love your stories Janet. You nearly always have this small femine type of boy who wants to be a girl. Although a lot of the stories are similar they still make compelling reading. It certainly would have been great to have had Susan's opportuneities when I was her age. Alas. Thanks.

Comment by Lee lee on 05/06/08
A gentle sweet and very feminine story.  I love the progression of introducing Susan to first her mother and then friends and finally the doctor. Of course the part about the opertation and implants etc went way to fast to have any relationship to reality  ( friends who are now post op went serveral years to finally reach their goal) it was erotic to feel with Susan and her mom the thrill of finally being female. thanks for a story well written  

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/20/07
Janet, great story!! I can't help but believe this story is your story of becoming who you are.  

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/25/06

The comlete story .... what else can be said this is what dreams are made of and tonight I will dream about lost days and lost dreams..

thank you Janet for a dream .... XO  Rone




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