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Cruise
by Vickie Tern

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Comment by Tina on 04/13/04
Great story;  I too enjoyed the fact that the guy/ girl ended up having some fun on his own terms and not totally humiliated!

You have great skill as a writer, but I'd love more where there is less humilation. Some is nice, but not too much, pretty please!

Love Tina xx

Comment by SassySue on 01/03/04
Lovely and well written as usual with great details of the transformation.  I especially liked that our hero ended up keeping and enjoyed using his male member in a loving relationship with his wife, instead of getting SRS.  All's well that ends well.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/02/04
Dear Vicki:

How vivid and loving and fantasy-fulfilling with all our fears addressed and comforted!!!  Loved every word.  Thank You.

Love & Huggles,
Sheryl S.



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