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Cruising
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by Aleesha on 07/04/10
I enjoyed your story. Many authors get their young men or perhaps older men to accept feminity easily but really that is a no brainer as wearing female clothing, having make up on and acting in a feminine way is much better than being a male.

Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 03/26/10
Hi Paula.
You wrote a lovely and sweet story of friendship and love!
Please, write more!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by DEE on 09/22/07
ENJOYABLE STORY OF UNREALIZED DREAMS COMMING TRUE

Comment by Jan_Wytte on 07/05/03
Dear Paula:
Nice Story, good job, very entertaining. You have a knack for making even the most uncomfortable situations smooth. The Explanation at the end was a little hurried,but more than adequate. Nice likable characters. and a fun cruise.
Vacayioningly, Jan

Comment by Paula on 07/04/03
enjoyable story

huggles

Paula

Comment by Fran on 07/04/03
I enjoyed your story. Hugs, Fran



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