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Comment by Dana on 05/09/09
I believe the writer should get a lot more credit, despite the grammer it is looking to be a delightful tale. Please finish it :) Comment by volka strife on 01/20/08 I think that i did jump the gun on posting it. I am working on a revised version with more details and will use the prof reads of this site to help. First there is no way to go back the nanites are still in the body and his body cannot take the stress. Second he wants the fresh start he spent his whole life working never getting to know many people. Also this is a world like our but not so haveing a person with allot of money is not heard of. For now i am taking a break from writing but before i move on i will repost the story with the hope of making them better. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 01/19/08 Volka, it's not my intent to scold -- you're trying to post a story, after all, which is further than I ever got. But your angry responses to the comments seem to miss the point. Comment by Volka Strife on 01/17/08 Those of a high iq tend to fail when it comes to grammar, look i have dyslexia and do worry people wince people seam to be not able to over look such a SMALL thing such as grammar and just look at the story and injoy it i do not think there will be any more after all the ones that i posted already i think that there is one more chop this one up to another one that will never be finished. Comment by Ashley on 01/15/08 Well to defend the author on a point, small children use that term all the time. My 4 year old niece loves to say kk. I'm thinking it’s from one of the TV shows she watches. I've tried to get her to say ok, but she always replies kk. Sometimes she is a very frustrating child =) Comment by Geoff P on 01/12/08 Strange, in the opening you boast that you have an IQ "so high they do not have a number for it" yet the story rapidly gets messy and barely shows any intelligence. Comment by Volka Strife on 01/08/08 Look it is a LITTLE kid talking. you bone head. Comment by me on 01/08/08 please use spell check, 4 is not an acceptable replacement for the word "for" and I have never heard anyone speak the internet word kk. |
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