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The Cut
by Transsub

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Comment by philip on 09/15/11
I thought it was an excellent story it had me hard immediately. I've always fantasized about total feminization against my will including castration, removal of penis eventually and new vagina put in and the get fucked as a whore just totally turns me on. I love that she had a black lover with a huge dick torturing her sissy husband by fucking in his in own bed. I loved that he was castrated in his sleep. that just got me all hot and bothered. thanks for the story, keep them cumming!

Comment by leelee on 06/01/10
I must admit I love piss and shit stories since they were an early part of my fantasy world when I masturbated as a youth.  From time to time I would try to taste the shit but just could not do it...then one day I hired a wonderful older woman as my personal secretary and she had had a long term fantasy about turning her husband into a sissy toilet   He did not like the idea and they were divorced just prior to her working for me. The circumstance of her finding out about my sissy desires and crossdressing can wait for another time but By the end of two years of working for me she had me in dresses every day and  a regime of her birth control pills   and then one day I asked her if I could watch her piss. I got a huge hard on watching and by the next day I was between her legs drinking it and did so almost every day for the next  ten  (10) years!  But meanwhile she wanted me to 'clean' her rear   I refused often but in a fit of drunkenness at a friends house I got down and rimmed him  I was amazed at how much of a turn on it was for me and the next day I told my Mistress secretary that I had rimmed a guy and I thought I was readdy to be her toilet. SHe started out slowlhy by first  making me close my eyes and then puttine a 'dirty' finger in my mouth and then a few days later she put a dab on my nose to wear for a few minutes and then one morning she came into my office andn said today was the day since we had nothing to do all day    I took off my clothes  and lay on the floor with my head against a chair and she sat on the chair naked and pushed her butt forward so that her hole was free of the seat  she had tied my hands onver my head and to the back chair legs  I opened my mouth and looked up  I was so turned on at what was going to happend that I had an uncontrollable hard on   THen I saw her rose bud wink and few time and a large dark morsel appear and then drop to my face   It fell right in my mouth and to the side   I did not move   and was not sure what I should do but had an urge to taste it and chew it    I started and got a liittle naseaus but then another morsel dropped on my closed mouth and I opened to take it   I worked them both and swallowed and then threw up   all over my self and the floor    the first time was wonderful but I gagged and got sick   the next morning I asked herif she would do it again and she agreed but said it would be best if I just would lick her instead    doing this and occasionally taking her whole load  I grew to love being her toilet and although I drank her piss every day and licked her bottom a couple of times a week and ate her shit maybe once a month or less I never got any dissease of sickness of any kind    I was lucky maybe   That all happend 15 years ago and she retired and moved to florida and I keep looking for a replace ment  SO your story was wonderful and believable    thank you

Comment by Ethel Grainger on 06/26/08
  Look, I know it's just a fantasy when authors write these kinds of stories but enough already.  Am I the only one who sees the inherit racism in these stories?  The racial stereotyping of the "big, black stud" and how feminine sissies should fear being cuckolded by a black man. I mean, imagine (while we're fantasizing) that it were an asian man, or a hispanic man , or any one of a number of other distinct possiblitie.  Would that still be racism?  In the first two instances I cited, quite possibly.  But they don"t have the sane gravitas as the streotypical "black man'.  And while we're at it, what's with the scat references?  Again I realize it's only a fantasy, but actually eating shit?  Come on!  What most authors don't take into consideration is the actual disease factor involved in this act.  I can hear you saying right now, "hey, you have your fantasies and I'll have mine.  Fair enough, bur I would like to ask just one thing.  Are you so spiritually bereft that you actually get off reading something like?  Yes, I know I'm being extremely judgemental.  But just as you have a right to engage in this type of fantasy, I also have the right to be appalled.  Come on folks, where's the love and humanity in this kind of story.  Alright, I've had my rant.  I also know that I've probably unleashed, you shouild pardon the expression, a 'shit storm'. So be it.

Comment by Richard Oberlin on 03/15/03
The Cut by Transsub

You really missed the boat by not making him service your sperm filled cunt before he beat off. Not letting him see you is also weird. Seeing what he had and lost would be really satisfying for you both. You could have at least made a ‘douche delight’ drink for his bedtime. Not to mention, menstrual sauce as a facial for going to the store or yard work, just to give him the public humiliation for him and personal satisfaction for yourself.  
The shit eating, right off the bat was a little extreme. You could have started out with some oral ass crack cleaning until he developed a taste for it and your use of him this way. How many orgasms by asshole did you pass up this way?
It is a mystery why you had such an aversion to your sissy husband seeing you or you and your black lover. No real woman would pass up such a chance to punish him in this way.
Putting the testicles in a jar of ether (I think you mean formaldehyde) was a waste. You could have had them bronzed and made into earrings for him/her. That way he would still have them, but dangling in his face all the time for the rest of his days. BTW, removal of testicles has no effect on the ability of the erectile tissue to function. The hormones do reduce the urge. Ejaculation can still be achieved, since the prostate gland is still a functioning part and can be massaged by the proper ass fucking strokes.
Hard to believe your black lover did not take advantage of the opportunity to lord it over the sissy husband. You never know, he could be visiting the slut at work even now…



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